ROAD TO GLORY RTG-01 · Underdog Run · Week 0

Second wave · August 22–26, 2026

Two people wrote back.

The Fentonian went to press on Friday under the headline "Nobody called." It was true when it was printed. It stopped being true on Tuesday night.

What happened. After nine messages and nine silences, Nick changed his approach on one variable: instead of writing to a program's general recruiting channel, he found the specific coach whose job it is to teach quarterbacks and wrote to that person by name, about that person's actual offense. He sent three. Two answered.

The coaches named on this page are real people. Everything they say here is fiction, written for this universe, and does not represent anything any real person has said or done.
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1 · Ball State
FBS · Mid-American Conference

Sent Saturday, August 22, 9:12 a.m. — to Craig Harmon, Offensive Pass Game Coordinator / Quarterbacks Coach. Ball State's first email, sent August 14 to the general recruiting address, was never opened.

From: Nicholas Mansour <n.mansour27@fentonschools.org>
To: Harmon, Craig
Subject: 2027 QB — Fenton HS (MI) — a question about your quick game
Sat, Aug 22, 2026, 9:12 AM

Coach Harmon,

My name is Nick Mansour. I'm a 2027 quarterback at Fenton High School in Michigan. I sent something to your program's recruiting address last week and I think it went into a folder, which is fine — I'd like to try this a different way.

I watched four of your games from last season. I want to ask you about something specific rather than tell you about myself, because you've read a thousand of those.

You run a lot of quick game with a built-in tag to the single receiver side, and against two-high teams you seem to want the quarterback taking the backside hitch or slant almost pre-snap — the read looks like it's the leverage of the corner more than the safety. But against the teams that played quarters and squatted that corner, I saw the ball go to the field side three-receiver surface instead, into the seam window behind the second-level defender.

My question: is that the quarterback's decision at the line, or is that tagged from the sideline based on what the corner did the previous series?

The reason I ask is that we run something structurally similar and we do it the second way, from the sideline, and I've been trying to make a case to my coordinator that I could do it at the line. I'd rather learn how a college staff handles it than keep arguing from nothing.

Film is below if you want it. Last year: 35 touchdowns, 0 interceptions, 75%, 850 rushing yards, 9–0. I'm 6-1, 182, and I'll tell you up front that I've never been to a camp, I play in a league nobody scouts, and I got hurt before the playoffs so there's no postseason tape. I'm not asking you to ignore any of that.

Thank you for the time either way.

Nick Mansour · QB · Fenton High School '27 · Fenton, MI
6-1, 182 · 3.91 GPA · HUDL: hudl.com/v/…
Coach Paul Shaffer (OC) — 810-555-0148
Three days
From: Craig Harmon
To: Nicholas Mansour
Subject: RE: 2027 QB — Fenton HS (MI) — a question about your quick game
Tue, Aug 25, 2026, 9:48 PM

Nick —

I've been doing this a while and that is the first recruiting email I've ever gotten that asked me a coaching question. So you got your answer to the real question, which is whether I'd open it.

To your actual question: it's both, and the split is the whole point. Early in a game it's tagged. We want to see how they're playing that corner before we put it on a 19-year-old. By the second half, if we've got a rhythm, it's his — he can kill the backside and go to the field surface on his own. What we don't do is give a young quarterback that freedom in the first quarter, because being right and being early are different problems and one of them costs you the football.

You caught the pattern from four games without anybody telling you the rule. That's not nothing.

Watched about twelve minutes of your stuff. Two things.

One. The throw I keep going back to is the one at 4:38 of the Linden cut, off the scramble to your left, no base at all, and it's a strike to the far hash. I don't teach that. I couldn't. Whatever that is, you have it.

Two, and this is the honest part: I don't know what I'm looking at, competition-wise. I have no reference for the league you're in, there's no camp number on you, and the frame is what it is. That's not me being negative, that's me telling you what I'd have to walk into a staff meeting and defend.

Send me a full game — the whole thing, both halves, no cutting. And tell me one more thing while you're at it, since you like this part: on the field-side seam throw we were talking about, what tells you it's there before the receiver gets to the window? Give me the specific thing you look at.

CH

Craig Harmon
Offensive Pass Game Coordinator / Quarterbacks · Ball State Football
Fifty-one minutes
From: Nicholas Mansour
To: Harmon, Craig
Subject: RE: RE: 2027 QB — Fenton HS (MI)
Tue, Aug 25, 2026, 10:39 PM

Coach,

Full game attached — Linden, October 10. Both halves, unedited, including a series in the third quarter where I take a sack I should not take. I left it in on purpose.

On the seam throw. It isn't the safety for me. Everybody says watch the safety and I think that's a half-second too late, because by the time the safety declares, the window is already closing.

The thing I look at is the second-level defender's shoulders on the third step — the hook/curl player to the trips side. In quarters, his rule is usually to carry the number two receiver vertical until the safety takes over. So if he opens his shoulders and turns to run with two, the safety is coming down over the top, and the seam is going to be squeezed from above. Kill it, take the backside.

But if his shoulders stay square and he widens flat-footed — if he's reading me instead of carrying the route — then nobody is passing that seam off. He's playing zone eyes and the safety is playing depth over the top of the outside receiver. That's the window, and it's there for about four-tenths of a second, and I have to be throwing it while the receiver is still two yards from it.

TRIPS FIELD — what I'm actually watching #1 #2 #3 [X backside] \ | / \ | / \ | / ┌── HOOK/CURL ──┐ ← HIS SHOULDERS. step 3. │ opens & runs │ = safety capping. kill it. │ stays square │ = nobody carries #2. THROW. └───────────────┘ FS

Two things I'll add so I'm not overselling it.

First, I've only had this be wrong on me twice, and both times it was because the defense was pattern-matching and the hook player was allowed to sit — so his shoulders told me the truth about him and nothing about the safety. I don't have a great answer for that yet. Against a team that does it well, I'd probably need to see it once and eat the incompletion.

Second, I know what my league is. When I say I've only been wrong twice, that's twelve games against defenses that mostly aren't disguising anything. I'd expect to be wrong a lot more against people who are trying to make me wrong. I'd rather be wrong in a place where somebody can fix it than be right here forever.

On the frame — I'm 182 now, I was 175 in June. I'm not going to promise you I'll be 210, because I don't know that. What I can tell you is I lifted at six in the morning four days a week all summer and I didn't miss.

Thank you for watching twelve minutes. That's twelve more than anyone else has.

Nick

Next morning
From: Craig Harmon
To: Nicholas Mansour
Subject: RE: RE: RE: 2027 QB — Fenton HS (MI)
Wed, Aug 26, 2026, 7:14 AM

The hook player's shoulders is the right answer and it's the answer I'd give. Most of the quarterbacks I've coached in college get there in year two.

You're also right that pattern-match breaks it, and the fact that you already know that's a hole instead of thinking your rule is bulletproof tells me more than the answer did.

Where we are, honestly: I'm not in a position to tell you anything about an offer. That's not my call alone and we're going to be deep into our own board before we get to Michigan quarterbacks who nobody's laid eyes on. I don't want to be the guy who gets a kid's hopes up in August.

What I will do is watch this Linden game this weekend and I'll keep your name in my folder. Send me a game after every three you play. Not highlights. Games.

Go win Friday.

CH


2 · Michigan State
FBS · Big Ten · 65 miles away

Sent Monday, August 24, 4:02 p.m. — recruiting questionnaire plus a follow-up email to the program's football recruiting address.

From: Nicholas Mansour
To: Michigan State Football — Recruiting
Subject: 2027 QB — Fenton HS — 65 miles from campus
Mon, Aug 24, 2026, 4:02 PM

To whoever reads these,

I filled out the questionnaire. I'm sending this too because I assume the questionnaire goes into a database and I'd rather a person saw it.

I'm a 2027 quarterback at Fenton High School, an hour and five minutes from your building. Last year I threw for 35 touchdowns with no interceptions at 75 percent and ran for 850 yards and we went 9–0. I'm 6-1, 182. I've never been to a camp and my league doesn't get scouted and I know exactly how this reads next to the quarterbacks you're actually recruiting.

I'm not going to pretend I think you're going to offer me. I'd like somebody on your staff to watch eight minutes and, if the answer is no, I'd genuinely rather have a no than nothing. A no is information. I could use some information.

Film below. Thank you.

Nick Mansour · QB · Fenton HS '27 · 6-1, 182 · 3.91 GPA
No response. The questionnaire generated an automated confirmation at 4:02 p.m. The email was never opened. The HUDL link was never clicked. As of Week 0 there is no evidence that any human being at Michigan State has seen his name, and there is no reason to expect otherwise — this is what a cold email to a Big Ten program does.

3 · Wyoming
FBS · Mountain West · 1,300 miles away

Sent Monday, August 24, 8:55 p.m. — to Christian Taylor, Offensive Coordinator / Quarterbacks.

From: Nicholas Mansour
To: Taylor, Christian
Subject: 2027 QB (Michigan) — I know I'm 1,300 miles outside your footprint
Mon, Aug 24, 2026, 8:55 PM

Coach Taylor,

I'm a 2027 quarterback at Fenton High School in Michigan and I'm aware that's not where you recruit. I'm writing anyway because of what I saw on your third-down tape.

You ask your quarterback to solve more at the line than almost anybody I watched this summer — the protection identification is clearly his, and there were at least six snaps where the front moved late and the ball still came out on time to the correct side. Wherever I end up, that is the job I want. It's the part of playing quarterback I'm best at and I'd rather be at a place that demands it than a place that protects me from it.

Last year: 35 TD, 0 INT, 75%, 850 rushing, 9–0 regular season. First season of organized football I've ever played — I was a student personnel assistant on my own team the year before that. 6-1, 182. No camps, no verified numbers, no postseason film. All of that is true and I'm not going to bury it at the bottom.

Film below.

Nick Mansour · QB · Fenton HS '27 · 3.91 GPA
Two days
From: Christian Taylor
To: Nicholas Mansour
Subject: RE: 2027 QB (Michigan)
Wed, Aug 26, 2026, 12:31 PM

Nick,

Watched it. You're right that it's the job here. Let me find out if you actually want it or if you just like the sound of it.

Five questions. Don't look anything up, don't ask your coordinator, and don't give me an answer you're not sure about — I'd rather have "I don't know" than a guess dressed up. Reply tonight.

1. Third and seven. They mug both A-gaps, six defenders on the line, you've got five linemen and a back. Who do you declare, and where's your ball if they bring all six?

2. Cover 2 to the field, you've got a smash concept out there — corner route over a hitch. Who's your read and what specifically is he telling you?

3. What's the difference to you, as a passer, between Tampa 2 and regular Cover 2?

4. Two-high shell, ball on the left hash. At the snap the boundary safety drops his hips and rolls down late. What is the coverage most likely becoming and what does it do to your backside?

5. Easiest one. Why zero interceptions? And don't tell me you were careful.

CT

Christian Taylor
Offensive Coordinator / Quarterbacks · Wyoming Football
Six hours, nine minutes
From: Nicholas Mansour
To: Taylor, Christian
Subject: RE: RE: 2027 QB (Michigan)
Wed, Aug 26, 2026, 6:40 PM
1 · Double A mug, six on five plus a back
Who do you declare, and where's the ball if they bring all six?
I declare the most dangerous inside linebacker to the side I want to slide away from — practically, I'm setting the Mike to the side with the extra hat so my slide picks up the four most likely rushers and my back has the fifth to the other side. Six rushers against five and a back means somebody is unblocked no matter what I do. That's not a protection problem, that's arithmetic.

So the ball is out hot, and it goes away from the slide, to the vacated space of whichever mugged backer actually comes. If they both come, one of them left a hole where he was standing and my hot is the receiver breaking into it — realistically a slant or a stick from the inside guy, on a three-step rhythm, and I'm throwing it before I feel anything.

The thing I'd add is that against a good team the answer is usually to not be in that down-and-distance, and the second answer is to make them prove they'll actually bring six. Most of them are bluffing. If they bail one of the two, my protection is fine and I've got a linebacker running out of the box with his back to me.
2 · Smash vs. Cover 2
Who's your read and what's he telling you?
The corner. He's the whole play. In Cover 2 he's a flat player with deep help behind him, so he's in a bind between the hitch in front of him and the corner route over the top.

If he sinks or carries with any depth, the hitch is open in front of him and I take it — that's not a disappointment, that's the concept working.

If he squats or jumps the hitch, the corner route is behind him and the throw goes over his outside shoulder toward the sideline, away from the safety, and it has to be out early because I'm throwing to a spot before the receiver's out of his break.

The part people miss is that the safety decides how much room I actually have on the corner route — if he's playing narrow because of something inside, the window's bigger; if he's already widening, I'd rather take the hitch and live. So the corner is the read and the safety is the volume knob.
3 · Tampa 2 vs. Cover 2
Difference to you as a passer?
The middle of the field. In straight Cover 2 the hole between the two safeties at about 15 to 18 yards is genuinely open, and that's where I want to live — a dig, a deep over, a seam sitting right in there.

In Tampa 2, the Mike runs to that exact spot. It's not open anymore, it's just late. So the throw I want is gone and the throws that replace it are the honest Cover 2 answers: the corner route outside, the flats, and the intermediate stuff underneath the Mike but behind the other linebackers as they widen.

The trap is that Tampa 2 looks like Cover 2 for the first second and a half. If I decide pre-snap that the hole is there and stop looking, I throw it into a linebacker who is running to the exact place I'm throwing. That's one of the two or three ways I'd expect to get picked off in college.
4 · Two-high, boundary safety rolls down late
What's it becoming and what happens to your backside?
It's almost certainly becoming single-high — a three-deep or a Cover 3 rotation, with the boundary safety coming down as an underneath or robber player and the other safety rotating to the middle. It can also be a quarters check that turns into man on the boundary. Either way, two-high is a lie by the time the ball's snapped.

What it does to my backside: my boundary receiver just lost his help. If it's Cover 3, that corner has the deep third by himself with no safety over the top of him and outside leverage problems on anything to the sideline — a fade or a back-shoulder is live. If it rolled to man, my boundary guy is one-on-one with nobody inside to help, and any inside-breaking route from a reduced split is available.

Since the ball's on the left hash, the boundary is short, so the throw's shorter and the window closes faster. The dangerous version is that the safety who dropped down is a robber sitting on exactly the dig I want. So my rule would be: if he rolls down late, go outside or go deep, don't go into the space he just moved into.
5 · Zero interceptions
And don't tell me you were careful.
I wasn't careful. I threw it into a lot of places I probably shouldn't have.

Three real reasons.

One, my league. I have to say it first because it's the biggest one. Most of the defenses I played were showing me exactly what they were doing before the snap and not changing it. That makes it very hard to be surprised, and almost every interception is a surprise.

Two, I'd rather take a sack than a bad throw, and I took some ugly ones. There's a sack in the third quarter of the Linden game I sent Ball State where I could have thrown it away and instead ate an eight-yard loss because I didn't like the angle. Our coordinator hated it. It's one of the reasons the number is zero.

Three, I don't throw a ball I can't take back. If I'm not sure, the ball goes low and away or it goes in the dirt. I'd rather be second-and-ten than explain something on Saturday.

And honestly — some of it's luck. I had two balls tipped last year that landed on the ground and one that a kid dropped standing still at the 30. A different Friday and I'm 35 and 3 and nobody's emailing you about me.
Nineteen minutes
From: Christian Taylor
To: Nicholas Mansour
Subject: RE: RE: RE: 2027 QB (Michigan)
Wed, Aug 26, 2026, 6:59 PM

Five for five.

Number three is the one that got me. Every high school kid can recite Tampa 2. You told me the trap in it and you told me it's how you'd get picked. That's a different thing.

Number one you actually answered better than I asked it — I wanted the declaration and the hot. You gave me the declaration, the hot, and then told me most of them are bluffing, which is the thing I spend all of August trying to get an 18-year-old to believe.

Now the part you're not going to like, and I'm going to give it to you straight because you gave me straight answers.

I'm not offering you anything today. You're 182 pounds, I have no verified numbers on you, you're in a league I've got no read on, and you're a plane ride from here. Our 2027 board has names on it already. If I walked into our staff room tomorrow and said I want to take a quarterback from Flint, Michigan off a Hudl link, I'd get laughed out of the room and I'd deserve it.

Here's what's real. You're now a name I know. That's worth more than you think and less than you want.

Two things I want from you.

One. Get to a camp. Any camp with a stopwatch and a tape measure. I don't care whose. The single thing standing between you and somebody being able to argue for you is that nobody can prove how tall you are or how fast you are. That's not an evaluation problem, that's a paperwork problem, and it's fixable.

Two. Send me your games. Not cutups. And send me the losses when you have one, because what I actually want to see is what you do the series after something goes wrong. Everybody looks like this when it's 9–0.

Good luck Friday.

CT


What actually changed

What he got

Real

Two coaches at the FBS level now know his name and have watched film. One asked for games on a standing schedule. One told him precisely what is blocking him and that it is fixable. Neither of those existed on Friday.

What he did not get

Also real

An offer. A visit. A phone call. A camp invitation. Any indication that either program will still be thinking about him in December. Interest from a coordinator is not interest from a program.

The new problem

Actionable

"Get to a camp. Any camp with a stopwatch." Camp season ended in June. The next one that matters is nine months away, unless somebody finds a winter or spring event — and somebody would have to pay for it and drive him there.

Who knows

As of Friday's kickoff

Nick. Ari, because she updates the spreadsheet. Nobody else. He has not told Shaffer, who has been emailing his own contacts for a month and getting nothing, and the reason he hasn't is not one he'd say out loud.

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Craig Harmon (Ball State) and Christian Taylor (Wyoming) are real coaches; all dialogue here is fiction written for this universe.